Waiting

One and thirty moons

ascended this deepest wood,

still I lie in wait.

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4 thoughts on “Waiting”

Naween Mangi

This one is one of my favourites. The deepest wood and lying in wait….how warm and exhilarating. Your poetry makes one really feel. What could be more meaningful than that.

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18th Dec 2021 at 4:12 pm Reply
Move Me Poetry, Online poetry community, USA

I love the composition of this one!!! That first line is stellar and then the concise, yet descriptive way you worded the second line was pristine!

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18th Dec 2021 at 5:18 pm Reply
Richard

Such lovely poems. So many good things here. Really intense feelings. A real pleasure to read.

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26th Dec 2021 at 2:04 pm Reply
1. Dee G Moray
  
  Thank you so much Richard, for your kind feedback.
  
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